Chapter 2 Young Justice Bao Liu Hongmin had thought about writing a literary work. Scar literature is the most popular subject at present. Unfortunately, as a time traveler from the 21st century, he really does not have the scars of this era. Not to mention scars, he has not even read the popular scar literature of this era, so he does not know how to write one if he wants to. Fortunately, he had watched quite a few TV dramas and movies. After traveling through time, his memory of these TV dramas and movies seemed to have been enhanced, and even the details were still fresh in his memory. When he writes novels, it's like watching a TV series and following along. What's lacking is not the content, but the writing style. As a TV series, "Famous" is still very good, but it is a bit slow to adapt it into a novel. This story took several months to write, and the outline was changed over and over again more than ten times, at least it didn't look so frivolous. If he dared to write that Bao's mother was a coroner, he would definitely be criticized by the students of Beijing University. People nowadays are still very conservative and will only feel that Liu Hongmin is making a fool of himself. Not only that, the heroine Ling Chuchu was directly cut off, and the responsibility of protecting Bao Zheng was temporarily given to Lu Yun, who was set up by Liu Hongmin as Zhan Zhao's cousin. In the second unit, Zhan Jun was deleted and Lu Yun was killed, which just happened to lead to the appearance of the Southern Hero Zhan Zhao. There was another person who was cut off, that was Gongsun Ce, whose role function overlapped with that of the protagonist Bao Zheng. Even in the TV series, Gongsun Ce and Bao Zheng have overlapping functions. Gongsun Ce was born as a failed scholar, whom Bao Zheng met at Daxiangguo Temple, so he didn't need to appear so early. The correct detective model has always been a two-person team, one responsible for intelligence and the other for force. This is true for Sherlock Holmes and Watson, Conan and Xiaolan, Di Renjie and Li Yuanfang, Qin Feng and Tang Ren.
Liu Hongmin also set up such a combination for Bao Zheng, that is, Bao Zheng and Zhan Zhao. The person who connected them was Lu Yun. The main plot and the crime process do not need to be changed much, just reduce the role of the Goryeo personnel. Goryeo was a vassal of the Northern Song Dynasty, how dare they attack Luzhou City? As for launching a war, there is no need to mention it. However, the death of the Goryeo prince is a very serious diplomatic incident, coupled with the fight between the Eighth Sage King and Master Pang, let it become the motivation for Bao Zheng to solve the case. Then integrate the previous changes into the main plot to make the story worth pondering. After Liu Hongmin finished writing the manuscript, he read it himself and found it hard to describe. This was his first time writing a novel and his writing was a mess. He also knew his shortcomings, so he went to the library and borrowed "Three Heroes and Five Gallants". The domestic market for mystery novels is relatively small, so there are not many good mystery novels. Although there are many foreign mystery novels, they are hard to find and the writing style is not worth learning from. The source of "Three Heroes and Five Gallants" is a chivalrous case novel, which can be said to be an ancient mystery novel, and it is somewhat meaningful to learn from. While reading "Three Heroes and Five Gallants", Liu Hongmin polished the manuscript of "Famous Throughout the World". When he felt it was almost ready, he went to find Zou Shifang. "Old Zou, the manuscript is ready." "Quick, let me see!" Zou Shifang quickly stood up, took the manuscript from Liu Hongmin, and began to read it impatiently. "Famous Throughout the World" is only the first unit of Shaobao 1. Because the writing style is borrowed from "Three Heroes and Five Gallants", the number of words is not very large, only about to . Zou Shifang read it very carefully. After all, this is a mystery novel. If you miss a detail, you may not understand the reasoning process. It took two hours for Zou Shifang to put the manuscript down. "Hongmin, you wrote it well!" Liu Hongmin smiled and said, "Is this true? Don't lie to me!" "Be more confident!" Zou Shifang said, "We are all college students, not famous writers. It's already pretty good to be able to write like this." "That's true, but you also have to consider talent." "We can't decide on talent ourselves. As long as you reach your limit, the rest is up to the public to judge!" "As expected of a philosophy major, you can really talk nonsense." Zou Shifang looked at Liu Hongmin speechlessly, "I can't hear a single good word from you. It's a pity that I still want to help you deliver the manuscript!" Liu Hongmin stretched out his hand, "Then return the manuscript to me?" "You're dreaming!" Zou Shifang pushed his hand away. "How can I let something that's in my hands escape?" After joking for a while, Liu Hongmin asked, "Old Zou, are you sure my novel can be selected?" "should be no problem."
"should?" Zou Shifang blushed, "I am not a novel editor. I only have the right to make suggestions, not the right to make decisions." Liu Hongmin did not make things difficult for him. After all, Zou Shifang was just a sophomore. "Okay, I'll go back and wait for your news. If the manuscript is rejected, just give it back to me and I'll submit it to another magazine." Zou Shifang nodded, "No problem, I'll hand the manuscript over to you right away. If it's really rejected, I will definitely return it to you as soon as possible." Having said that, he went out with Liu Hongmin, and after saying goodbye, he went directly to the editorial office of Weiming Lake. Liu Hongmin was also not idle and began to prepare Shao Bao’s second unit story, "Blood Altar". There is a big bug in the blood altar, that is the mysterious Qiyi people. The Qiyi people originated from the Donghu and are of the same lineage as the Xianbei Khitan. During the Eastern Jin Dynasty and the Southern and Northern Dynasties, they moved to Yunzhong County in Shanxi Province and were good at weaving, iron smelting, fishing, hunting and oil refining. During the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms period, some of the Qiyi people moved to Shandong, Henan and Anhui, making sabers, providing armor and boiling tung oil for Zhou Shizong Chai Rong for use by the army. Later, at the end of the Northern Song Dynasty, the Qiyi people gradually integrated into the Han nationality and disappeared in the long river of history. Therefore, the Waiyi tribe in "Blood Altar" is just a pseudonym, and their behavior and style are all fictional. TV dramas don’t need to be sophisticated, but novels need to look more reasonable. In the Song Dynasty, it was impossible for strange ethnic groups to appear in Luzhou, as the area had already been fully developed. Even if there were the Qiyi people, they would have the same living customs as the local Han people. Liu Hongmin did not write about the Qiyi people, but replaced them with Liao spies. Otherwise, Shen Liang in "Famous Throughout the World" would appear very abruptly. If a group of Liao spies built a village on the mountain near Luzhou and hid there, it would make sense. It would just connect with Shen Liang, continue part of the story of "Famous Throughout the World", and fill in the hole of Shen Liang's origin. The village secretly built by the Liao spies was discovered by someone who thought they had treasure, so they were killed. This was completely reasonable. However, the murderers who killed the Liao spies in the village could not be just four people, but also the soldiers under Mu Dutong. At that time, Meng Fang and Chang Yu were able to survive because of Shen Liang's rescue, and the two became Shen Liang's source of information about Luzhou, so that they could quickly integrate into Luzhou and become the knife head. (End of this chapter)